Death Came for a Visit
- heatherreba
- Jan 15
- 3 min read
Poetry: November, 2025

Part I
Death came into my father’s hospital room for a visit.
He slinked into the room like a wisp of fog
that snakes around rocks and hovers above the pond.
His black eyes observed my father
with watchful understanding and patience.
His slender fingers floated through the air
as if they themselves could sense my father’s readiness
like a barometer predicts an incoming storm.
He floated,
intent on my father as though no one else was in the room,
and we weren’t really,
It was only he and my father,
beginning a dance set to music only they could hear.
But I could sense him.
He was in my father‘s words,
“I think it’s time to give up”
and in his eyes, heavy with acceptance
and slightly cloudy as though he were looking past all of us
to something beckoning him from the beyond.
It was in my mother’s hands,
as she instinctively reached out to him in the hospital bed
and touched him on the arm
with a grip she prayed could keep him bound to his body
and here with us.
I saw it in the eyes of the doctor and nurses,
as their brows furrowed,
recognizing the presence of their nemesis
and looked wearily and with trepidation
toward the loss of another battle.
Death came for a brief visit,
then left as swiftly as he had come,
as though called to another hospital room,
where his attendance was more pressingly required.
I know he will return
as my father’s dance has just begun.
We just don’t know how many songs will play
before the end.
Part II
Death came again.
He’s been watching from afar,
too far away for me to notice him,
but tonight he entered the house.
He’s now staying in the shadows of this very room,
in the dark corners where his dull black eyes
blend into the nothingness.
But I know he’s there.
He’s not in my father’s moans,
or his incoherent babbling.
He’s not in his clutching hands
that reach out for something I can’t provide.
He’s not in my mother’s cracking voice
as she acknowledges she has reached her limit,
“I can’t do this.”
Instead I see death in the stillness of my father’s chest
in between his ragged breaths.
I hear him in the ticking clock
that marks the seconds of my father’s transition.
Soon my father will slip and fall
and it will only be Death who can catch him.
I hope his grasp is gentle
and feels like home.
Part III
He now sits on the edge of my father’s bed,
waiting,
Holding my father’s hand,
which must be why it’s so cold.
His closer presence has calmed my father,
taken away the panic, the hallucinations.
Or is that the morphine?
Death reaches out his slender fingers
and rests them briefly on my father’s brow
as he peers at him with curiosity,
Anticipating the feeling of this new soul in his arms
as he carries him into eternity.
Part IV
Death is gone.
His final presence was felt in the hospice nurse’s prayer
over my father’s body,
In the long pauses in between
my father’s final ragged breaths,
In the faces of the family who stood vigil
during the last moments,
In the gentle and caring hands of the morticians
who gently wrapped his body in a white shroud,
In the emptiness of the room
that now contains no visitors,
no body,
no family,
just an empty hospital bed
that will soon be picked up and taken away as well.
Death has enticed my father’s soul away
with his soothing, seductive whispers,
and graceful hands,
With promises of rest
and the love of those
who he has already taken away.
And now my father is free.



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